At The Rivers Edge Comments

A time to remember is well a time of sorrows if i lose someone i will recite these words with a bitter taste from an un -returned love Beautiful

A gloomy write in a flow like water in rivers.

Thinking back misty eyed at the loss of someone so tantalizingly within reach but slipped out of hands! Beautifully expressed! !

Dreams are unclaimed desires which satisfies our mind and soul. A touch of sorrow with a drop of tears lies in your lines in this age too. Cheer up and continue your poems

Dreams are unclaimed desires which satisfies our mind and soul. A touch of sorrow with a drop of tears lies in your lines in this age too. Cheer up and continue your poems