Tuesday, September 12, 2017

At The Poolside Comments

Rating: 4.7

Above were a few birds hovering
And an airplane passing

My grand-daughter put on her swim dress
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Indira Renganathan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 May 2023

I always welcome that solitary silence and solitude.....peace of mind is so crucial. An excellent poem dear madam.

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Akhtar Jawad 12 November 2017

How could she know that I too was swimming Hers was real, mine was virtual........................great poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 September 2017

Both you and your little grand daughter enjoyed the poolside but her was something difference. She plunged into the azure water and did swim was real. You were in trance and in virtual. Dear madam this has been so nicely inscribed by you. Let it be quoted... But the way She enjoyed was different From the way I did . '/////////////// That's it granny', moments later Little girl nudged me How could she know that I too was swimming Hers was real, mine was virtual But.... you know my imageries, I'm sure As a poet. Beautiful poem shared Thanks for sharing.

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