Saturday, February 17, 2018

At The Physiotherapist Comments

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In the waiting room, I heard this strange soft conversation,
no, I was not at the psychotherapist.

come, my sweetheart, I invite you
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 July 2020

Thank you so much dear poets for all your kindest compliments, your creative comments and your precious feedback. My greatest thanks go to Dr. Dillip KS, to Rev. Bernard Sir and to the lovely Mrs. Juan Austin. From the bottom of my heart, thank you so much dear poets. God's Blessings greatest for all three of you.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 February 2018

A very beautiful love poem. There are lines that are so imaginative and the title is captivating that will impel the reader to go through this beautifully crafted write. Fantastic!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 February 2018

Sylvia, such a superb poem👍👍👍

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 February 2018

It's lovely poem! Though it is a bit lengthy as you mention in your notes but I say it is surely a humorous one. I liked the second stanza most: come, my sweetheart, I invite you/come in my messy house/have not been cleaned up/I have been away for a long time/come back now with a bunch of luggage/I will clear the whole house/cleaning, cleaning everything up..enjoyed...10

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

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