Friday, August 11, 2017

At The Mountain Top Comments

Rating: 4.8

At the Mountain top I look down
and I reflect on my past
At the mountain top I look down
and I realize how far I've come
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Qiniso Mogale
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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 September 2019

A marvelous poem! Self knowledge is the main theme here, excellently worded and beautifully rendered. A 10 Full Score for the Voting. Thank you for sharing this powerful piece of poetry. ENJOY your BirthDAY TODAY. Many happy returns of the Day. God´s Blessings in Abundance for you. Amen.

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 December 2017

the Mountain top has become a place of wonder, and spirituality and a place of deep Meditation. you have make use of the peace and tranquility on the top of the mountain. thank you my dear...... you are a spiritual Poet........a Poet of reflection..... thank you again... tony

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Richard Wlodarski 01 September 2017

Qiniso, your poem brings back some very pleasant memories of when I first climbed a mountain. And now because of your poem, I can revisit the mountain in my mind's eye and examine my life from the various perspectives that you've presented. Thank you for giving me that opportunity. Excellent write!

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 August 2017

I look down! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 August 2017

Your poem 'At The Mountain Top' is an arena that reveals the roles of the persons and progress of your life. So nicely you have presented here... At the mountain I see all the tests I've passed At the Mountain top I'm grateful to God for upholding me with His righteous right hand.

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Rajnish Manga 11 August 2017

The poem reflects the human face of the protagonist at the height of his achievements. Very real. At the Mountain top I'm grateful to God for upholding me with His righteous right hand. At the mountain top I look back on the mistakes that should have been avoided

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Kuda Bondamakara 11 August 2017

Right after having fought and won all battles, comes a time to reminsce. Very good piece Qiniso.

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Qiniso Mogale 11 August 2017

I thank you Kuda

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