Monday, May 18, 2009

At The Master´s Table Comments

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Under The Master´s Table

“The woman came and knelt before him. “ Lord, help-me! ” she said”
He replied, “ It is not right to take the children´s bread and toss it to the dogs.”
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obed Souza
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Noel Horlanda 21 September 2009

This piece is well said, however sorry I'm not fond of quoting cliches taken from other books particularly the Bible because I believe it's not ethical to do so in a poetry. It's good that you mention the chapter no. and the verses right after. That's all right if we're writing an article. Again, this is my belief, my own opinion only. I don't know with the others if they agree. Thanks

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Surya . 14 August 2009

great wisdom. well potrayed in this poem.thanx for sharing, . voted10 surya

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Chitra - 19 July 2009

pearls of wisdom...profound in thought!

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C. P. Sharma 29 May 2009

Truth with humility. CP

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Roshni D'Souza 23 May 2009

'Truth is a river where the strong can swim in deep... ...and the weak and the broken walk across so easily'-Caedmon's Call Absolutely brilliant, Obed....it oozes WISDOM! Thanks, roshni.

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James Mclain 20 May 2009

Being the dog, it is, that i am, under this table, i would rest, quite happily and waite in the foot of the keep...iip

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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 May 2009

Excellent poem. Love it with 10++

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Shashendra Amalshan 19 May 2009

'It is bred in the land of starvation An underground world Where comfort zones are not allowed Under the master´s table, where the underdogs Strive for food - celestial food' simply outstanding poem....A very universal theme well expressed indeed...thanks for sharing...wat a food of thught..this one arouses our mind's eye and make us think about the pathetic state world has crumbled it self into..10.

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