Sunday, April 23, 2006

At The Grave Comments

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all souls day
at the cemetery
eyes are asterisks
to love stories
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john tiong chunghoo
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Raynette Eitel 23 April 2006

This is original, John. Your description of asterisk eyes is a fresh idea. Change 'learnt' to 'learned.' I like this one. Raynette

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Sandra Fowler 23 April 2006

A wonderful write. An original mind is definately at work here. Kind regards, Sandra

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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