On a patch of soiled Earth
As I stood feeling rather glum
With eyes poised on the horizon far
I saw an assemblage of colors
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I have added this amazing work of art to my poem list!
Wow! Wow! Wonderful is this amazing work of art! Excellently expressed my friend!
As said before your poems on Nature are not merely poems but outstanding creations of beautiful Nature and putting them lively before us........Valsa.....and this is amazing......a sure 10/10
You've painted a beautiful picture here of the rainbow with its hues. And as a spectator, I've enjoyed the delightful excursion. And you certainly did find a pot of joy there. A wonderful job Valsa. Thank you.
Nothing more beautiful than a rainbow and you have nailed it so perfectly and more so and its the the last lines that make you read it again...regards
You seem to be very akin to nature and that is so great.Like a beautiful painting. A soothing, comforting poem with that ever beautiful rainbow A 10 for sure
You have painted a picturesque canvas in this poem of finesse with your lively imagination! One is transported to the patch where you stood with eyes poised on the horizon farand from there along with you one goes to view the various pastels and becomes so joyful and glad! Beauty at its best, dear Valsa!
Concluding is as beautiful as rainbow a colourful poem lovely one
It is years since I saw a clear rainbow and while going through the poem I remembered a few rainbows I have ever seen.... God`s involvement in their making has to be contrasted with the sketches of the dreadful volcanic mouths which we need not see from our small landscapes... When will this nature be truly understood by us? Thank you madam Valsa for this write that arouses nostalgia.
Feasting eyes on Mother Nature you feel ecstatic joy, It reminds me of Wordsworth's 'My Heart Leaps up when I Behold a rainbow in the Sky'
after the rain so many thibgs are fresh even the colors a rainbow consists of.birds chatteribg as if they are singing and say they are thankful to God.so why musnt human be? fabulous~nb10++++
When God willfully spilled a drop of Indigo Into the vast stretch of waters below It turned into hazy blue And upon its glassy surface, The sky is mirrored in azure hue this poetess makes our horizon of love, and like 'color 'stokes of brush
Who can stay wretched and sad when all around is so joyful and glad? You really paint a beautiful picture with words Valsa, a lovely poem.
what a vivid picture you paint through your words...the scene is for the eyes and this poem is for the mind.. a soothing balm.. bravo...enjoyed fully..
A poem? or the Colourist Painting under the French Impressionism with the use of intense colours? the art is not only to see and feel, but to make others see and feel also...PICTURESQUE! ! !
A wonderful explanation of God's art on this Earth.I feel like this. I want to live just to see the next morrow with nature's plethora of beauty.
poem of the day what a great write losing mind feeling unconsious having complex do u really exist how do you bear the burden of so much talent?
A fantastic expression has been made on rainbow and its different color incisively. I quote....... When God willfully spilled a drop of Indigo Into the vast stretch of waters below It turned into hazy blue And upon its glassy surface, The sky is mirrored in azure hue Beautiful poem.10