At The Garage.. Comments
How old is this car of yours?
Doctor, its running into the late seventies
The engine is a bit too noisy
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I liked this poem - the human body likened to an automobile. The pathetic condition of it is well described in apt words. Good work.
A poignant and serious message delivered with a finely honed sense of humour. Brilliant.
Deep speculation. Nice presentation. Beautiful poem I like most. Many thanks.
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7/23/2025 9:48:16 AM # 1.0.0
Very good, and enjoyable juxtaposition! The metaphor is spot on.