At The Finish Comments

I like this quite a bit, the first two lines are excellent.

beautifully penned the sad fact! 'we are nothing but a part of tiniest dust'--> this verse will you find in my next poem! well done sonya 10+

..... surely sadness comes last.......; and it is last to go, very slowly, like a slow motion movie and mind you, dear, the taste lingers on and on......! Lovely poem, sonya!

Sometimes we have no time to sit and relax and watch the world go by, poignant piece 10 Lynda xx

I love this quirky little poem. It's It's rhythmic, rhapsodic and carries a poignant message. Great stuff! S :)

sadness or understanding? Denial or acceptance? I don't know, but, I think I can see where time leads. :) N

A whimsical little piece with a catchy rhythm. Angst with flair. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

The ending finished in a sad note. That also can be managed to be joyful. Nice poem.