Sunday, September 30, 2012

At The Finest Moment Comments

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VIPINS PUTHOORAN
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Valsa George 14 December 2012

Such a beautiful quatrain, in perfect rhyme and packed with meaning! !

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 27 November 2012

great realization of life with a few lines. Simple but exceptional.

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Wabi Sabi 21 November 2012

I like the way it sounds. It sounds as if arrogant, but very tender. I want to be a part of it there.

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Sallam Yassin 17 November 2012

concentrated as nectar pure and wise few lines of life well done

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Hazel Durham 17 November 2012

Amazing write, in just a few lines you have put life into perspective!

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Asif Andalib 17 November 2012

Yeah so short life. Lovely write. Keep it up

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Rajkamal P.j 23 October 2012

good thought..philosophical..keep writing

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Unwritten Soul 11 October 2012

Vipins, your strength is really inside your pen and how it works on a paper land..you can sketch picture by it, consume language in very delicately, and here i bear the finest talent that you ever have in yourself, keep writing Vipins, its your gift to use_Soul

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Hans Vr 11 October 2012

Wow, Vipins, I am so happy to read new poems from you again. This one is thinking about our last moments They can be the most glorious moments of our lives when we see over our whole lives in retrospect Or they could be miserable moments depending on how we have lived It really worth to spend our lives in living random kind acts This will help to make our final moments great Very thought provoking poem, my friend, Excellent work.

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A B 11 October 2012

short n sweet and how true.........

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Payal Parande 06 October 2012

wonderful and beautiful...you take me to an another world thank you for sharing sir love payal

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 03 October 2012

Short but powerful poem my friend. Siya_! !

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Karen Sinclair 02 October 2012

Beautiful language, incorporating a little middle english....lovely....tyvm karen

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Lalitha iyer 02 October 2012

VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL LINES. BREVITY IS THE BEAUTY OF LIFE AND THE POEM TOO

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