Wednesday, October 16, 2013

At The End Of Walkway Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's a pity not to pay attention
Of this darkness:
Here, 'Jasmine' drink the tears;
Did you smell sobbing perfume..? !
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Fatima Nusairat
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Fatima Nusairat 21 May 2014

Thank you Loyd, appreciated :)

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 21 May 2014

Hello Fatimah. You write with such passion of soul, a nice read, I enjoyed, Loyd

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Utsav Patel 06 November 2013

You have great potential.. Wow this is so powerful write. Those last lines.. Lights that flash the night.. Brilliant! It just reminds my poem will o' the wisp :)

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