It's a pity not to pay attention
Of this darkness:
Here, 'Jasmine' drink the tears;
Did you smell sobbing perfume..? !
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Hello Fatimah. You write with such passion of soul, a nice read, I enjoyed, Loyd
You have great potential.. Wow this is so powerful write. Those last lines.. Lights that flash the night.. Brilliant! It just reminds my poem will o' the wisp :)
Thank you Loyd, appreciated :)