At The End Comments

‘I search for sustenance.’ ~ driving force to deny end… Nice diction 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

Poetic, musical, meaningfull and touching, well done

You never know how much you love and/or enjoy something until you feel it slipping away... beautifully written.

Its the cycle of man's urges a fleeting satisfaction soon to crave.....well done in a succinct way!

short and sweet yet powerful enough to touch me.. great write..10

i found out, these are beautiful..grace..