Friday, July 26, 2013

At The Edge Of The Void Comments

Rating: 2.5

Swirling, a dark abyss consumes light and life
The cracks and whips of the torrent rip into night silence like a knife
I move forward, an unsteady step toward the unknown
And fall...
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Peter Vector
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Beautiful piece of work I must confess. Love it!

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Gajanan Mishra 26 July 2013

let the ocean take me, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Gajanan Mishra 26 July 2013

let the ocean take me, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Gajanan Mishra 26 July 2013

let the ocean take me, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Gajanan Mishra 26 July 2013

let the ocean take me, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Gajanan Mishra 26 July 2013

let the ocean take me, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Gajanan Mishra 26 July 2013

let the ocean take me, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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