At the edge of the body
there is said to be
a flaming halo-
yellow, red, blue
...
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So nicely and touchingly it has been inscribed the edge of the body relating to soul. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the modern poem of the poem of the day.
A nice poem on the existence of a halo around the body. Very nicely crafted and enjoyed reading it. 'I gaze at the place where he turns into air & the flames of his skin combine with the flames of the sky, proving the existence of both.'... is an amazing stanza. Loved it.
Without squinting, I almost see it. An angry red aura changing to white, the color of peace./// superb expression
The interrelation and bondage between edge of the body of the loved one and his soul wonderfully unveiled. Well deserved modern poem of the day.