Wednesday, March 28, 2012

At The Edge Of The Body Comments

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At the edge of the body
there is said to be
a flaming halo-
yellow, red, blue
...
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Erica Jong
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Ratnakar Mandlik 27 November 2019

The interrelation and bondage between edge of the body of the loved one and his soul wonderfully unveiled. Well deserved modern poem of the day.

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Lyn Paul 27 November 2019

Amazing write. Read with great interest.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 November 2019

So nicely and touchingly it has been inscribed the edge of the body relating to soul. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the modern poem of the poem of the day.

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 November 2019

A nice poem on the existence of a halo around the body. Very nicely crafted and enjoyed reading it. 'I gaze at the place where he turns into air & the flames of his skin combine with the flames of the sky, proving the existence of both.'... is an amazing stanza. Loved it.

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 November 2019

Without squinting, I almost see it. An angry red aura changing to white, the color of peace./// superb expression

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