Tuesday, June 22, 2021

At The Edge Of Heaven Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like an ocean wind
It flows into yr eyes
And stings them with the salty air
You can't get away
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 June 2021

Such a marvelous poem! Thanks for sharing.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 25 June 2021

Lovely, joyous description of the pure bliss awaiting on the verge of heaven. So much enjoyed.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 25 June 2021

Wow a lovely poem, i like the sea salty stanza and mention of heaven. Kudos for fab poem! ! !

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Lasaad Tayeb 24 June 2021

Stunning write that deserve top stars, please take a look at my page, Thanks

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Brilliant Poem that deserves top marks

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Step by step - at the edge of heaven - waiting for salvation.....Profound truth of life

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Kostas Lagos 24 June 2021

Amazing work!

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M Asim Nehal 24 June 2021

Amusing. To sum-up in one word. Entire life's philosophy to reach heavens so well written. ***********

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Kevin Patrick 23 June 2021

Captivating and ethereal, there is a sadness but a warmth, the final wave of death carries us into that ocean of eternity. Beautiful work LeeAnn

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Anjandev Roy 22 June 2021

But you need to carry on.....significant..

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 June 2021

Eerie poem, dear! But well worded, that is sure. Bravo!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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