Like an ocean wind
It flows into yr eyes
And stings them with the salty air
You can't get away
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Lovely, joyous description of the pure bliss awaiting on the verge of heaven. So much enjoyed.
Wow a lovely poem, i like the sea salty stanza and mention of heaven. Kudos for fab poem! ! !
Stunning write that deserve top stars, please take a look at my page, Thanks
Step by step - at the edge of heaven - waiting for salvation.....Profound truth of life
Amusing. To sum-up in one word. Entire life's philosophy to reach heavens so well written. ***********
Captivating and ethereal, there is a sadness but a warmth, the final wave of death carries us into that ocean of eternity. Beautiful work LeeAnn
Such a marvelous poem! Thanks for sharing.