At The Edge Comments

Lovely , very natural expression.... enjoyed it like a hot pizza

There is something very unsettling about the vastness of the ocean, especially when known landmarks and familiar horizons are lost to sight. You capture this very well in the vividness of your writing, then develop the basis for the heaviness of heart communicated by the extended metaphor. How we all of human hearts long to see the end of suffering and pain, especially when the occasions are as vast as the ocean around us. A well crafted, and poignantly beautiful piece of writing. Bravo, good poet. :) S

Hi Rini, I fear, you have got it wrong, when you say - -World full love and no sorrows- It is said, it is the sorrows of life that makes the smallest happiness in our lives valuable... If life were a bed of roses, you would definitely hate roses! !

The corruption of the world! ! Oh mankind! Thanks for sharing.

Amidst all these problems I have to live.......with God's grace......your thoughts are very very natural......beautifully expressed in your lucid style.......

Your concern is genuine. We are going through a bad time and can't say what bda will happen in the next moment. Very nice.

A great poetic imagination. Thanks...