Sunday, April 13, 2008

At The Dentist-Short Story Comments

Rating: 5.0

Angela sits pretending to read some magazines,
In the dentist's waiting room.

"No way will I have gas! " she'd said.
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Paul Butters
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Greenwolfe 1962 14 June 2008

I was given ether as a child. One of the worst experiences of my life. I'm glad its better now. GW62

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Craig Anderson 21 April 2008

I was riveted by this. It was if I was getting in the chair, a really excellent expression of the surroundings, pipes and the black mask and all (shudders) . You have a great talent in your descriptives Paul. Regards Craig.

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Ernestine Northover 13 April 2008

I remember GAS when I was about seven, and I hated it, I'd rather have an injection anyday. It is all so clinical though, which makes it even more fearful. Dentists don't worry me now thankgoodness. So I could enjoy this without any phobias appearing. Well described. Love poems about everyday events. Love Ernestine XXX

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