Tuesday, August 4, 2015

At The County Fair Comments

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I’ve got a bushel and a peck
I got the ribbon ‘round her neck
Yes, My lamb has won first prize
There’s a twinkle in my eyes.
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Paul Amrod
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Kim Barney 10 November 2015

You said There’s a tinkle in my eyes. Doesn't that hurt? I wouldn't let anybody tinkle in my eyes if I could help it. I think you meant a TWINKLE. Keep writing.

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Chateaugay, New York
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