At The Cosmic Saloon Comments

Hi Sranisha, This is a certain variation of a Hillbilly style of writing.I was born near the hillbillies in eastern USA. Warm regards, Paul

very beautiful and very imaginary.

Thanks Kurt and Rajnish for your interest. The basis of this poem came from 1983 and it has sat around since then and I had fun to expand upon it. Greetings, Paul

The imagery of the poem and its narrative is very sweet and interesting. The style and your choice of words is just awesome. The description of nature and the mundane activities of life is unique. Thanks. At the cosmic saloon I drank moonshine until daybreak

I would like to visit that saloon, Paul.