Thursday, December 4, 2008

At The Confluence... Comments

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At the confluence
Our souls converged
Like the Blue Nile and the White
Tears flowed as one
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Fasika Ayalew
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Mamta Agarwal 05 December 2008

love is confluence of two souls- nice imagery. tears of joy and ecstasy- emotional write. good work Fasika Mamta

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 04 December 2008

Beautiful poem Fasika. Your imagery, as always, is very close to nature which is good for poetry. Please keep on writing. Love is confluence of two souls.

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Fasika Ayalew

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