At The Cafe Comments

A sweet poem....loved it.5 stars

2) Poems are for showing the true feeling of the poet, aren't they? In this cumbersome poem, one thing is clear: he loves her!

2) a restrained emotional poem, of a shy man or a difficult-expressing soul? The real smoke poison that intoxicates or will revive the situation because of nicotine influence?

I am truly impressed by this Poet from Malaysian birth, since I am myself from Jakartan birth (Indonesia) . Thank you for sharing.5 Sars full for this amazing story-poem

very nice, there is so much feeling.