At The Bus Stop Comments

This is a really really stupid poem. I don't even want to comment on the terribly amateurish attempt at a poem.

a lovely description of a commuter who suffers everyday with this sort of troubles and confusion where I also can relate myself. excellent.

That was fun! I love the cultural education too!

Very very good Dr. Pradhan. This type of situation reminds me not about the bus stop but riding the subways in the large cities. They are sometimes slow, crowded, dirty and most times late. When you have to get to work on time it can be a horrible situation to be caught in. It is difficult to stay calm and patient. Definitely not for the weak minded. Another eye opener from you. Well said.

you have managed to succintly put together the various thoughts that run amok one's mind while waiting for the bus.. i love the link ups created that could have been responsible for the possible delay and how u have succeeded in co-relating it to the myriad of emotions that a human mind is entangled in! ! awesome imagination and profound linkage. kudos! ! |

you have managed to succintly put together the various thoughts that run amok one's mind while waiting for the bus.. i love the link ups created that could have been responsible for the possible delay and how u succeeded in co-relating it to the myriad of emotions that a human mind is entangled in.! ! awesome imaginations and profound linkages. kudos! ! |

What a original poem. Never read anything like this. Perfectively depicts the state of mind of passengers at a bus stop. I give 10 out of 10.

This is a good write sir, you have beautifully portrayed the tensions that can spur in the mind of a commuter. I felt this also as a mockery towards the general public who are fickle minded in having a stand. Bravo!