At The Brink Comments

Nicely and wisely said about the human tendecies of adict. well structured, that is the beauty of this poem.10

LUSTS, draw people into many strange forms of behavior.

At the brink... what does one say. height of degeneration of ethics, no end to avarice.powerful. vivid images10 Happy new year Mamta

Sathya - this one has style, and fast flow in reading - in fact all the well chosen back-to back alliteration is very effective - - - and onto which you make a very strong appeal for sense in life's matters......... good read my friend...... from Fay. xx

Praise for your creative energy. Your excellent title supports the content of your poem. Very surreal.10 for you. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

Wild side of the human beast exposed in a gripping write.....praise be to you!

lot of punch to it...

very nice poem i give it a 10!

Sathya, this is an excellent poem. We search in all the wrong places, our desires lead us so far from the truth, that pleasure is not happiness. Bob 10

what a fantastic piece! ! ! ! ! ! I just loved this one.

striving from one to another- true we spend time in nonsense no wonder god is diappointed- good write-10