**at The Brink Of Our Eyes** Comments

silent of the immortality of the soul gallops the vision of this poem.....full of memory to share, just a remembrance of time....the post hoc of present down to the last day of our stay...its life to remember forever, through out eternity .....thank you for sharing...a 10/10

'and the bubble in our eyes never burst' the emotion in these words are so strong and so well propounded that one can almost feel it -and live it -you have given words to the sensation which was otherwise hard to express-thank you rago for sharing them.

the first and second stanzas are well written and meaningful, lovely indeed...cheers

Marvelous composition my friend.........lovely dear!

unsaid love.....................................

Some excellent lines in your well written poem.10/10 Regards. Ian

Unsaid love... some times its understood, sometimes misunderstood and at most times not understood! liked these lines: ........................................................... where the unsaid love in us, at the brink of our eyes enjoyed in calm ...........................................................