Tuesday, November 24, 2015

At The Break Of Morn Comments

Rating: 5.0

N-ew dawn has just broken
O-n twenty-third November;
R-emembering your birth
I-n early rise from slumber.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Avid Fan 03 May 2019

N-ew dawn has just broken O-n twenty-third November; R-emembering your birth I-n early rise from slumber. I am amazed by your talent, sir Bernard.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 December 2018

New dawn! ! New day! Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 October 2018

A beautiful poem on birthday has been astutely delineated in an acrostic form. Thanks for sharing.

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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