At The Bench Comments

HI MORE POWER YOUNG POET SURE U WOULD BE BETTER THAN VILLA SOMEDAY TAGA CDO MAN POD KO JAN SA BURGOS TRY TO READ MY ABU SAYAF POEM

If you garnish this vocabulary any more we will be banished from your world...lol..iip

The descriptive expressions used here defy the reader to do anything but be taken up to the dreamy heights along with the rich words..... Juneil this breathes romance..... and 10 + + ++ from Fay for the breathtaking ride.

Juneil Your imagery and vocabulary are excellent! I loved 'carousel head' and nectar of love The last stanza wrapped up a brilliant and beautiful piece of work. Karin Anderson 10 from me

Cosmic poetry applied written in a nice imagery....10

richly worded to suit the theme...

wonderful cosmic imagery write..impressive verses...10

You are quite good and consistent with your selection of diction. 10 From Me.

Blown away, my friend! good work.

very poetic..lines are flowing with depth wonderful imagery great write...

owwwwwwwwwwwssss...beautiful and very nice, , , cheers

hey again you are a very great poet and i loved your poem.....by the way who was your dream girl that you was speaking of in the beginning? ? ? ? ? ? '? _

What stunning scene you've painting with these wonderful penned lines of a true poets eyes. BRAVO! !

Have to go look for a bench

This writing is filled with glorious lines that make reading it a pleasure. I could really recommend it on that basis alone. I am not sure that it does more than this, however. I can imagine a writer writing this on a bench at night. That it may not have happened that way is a credit to the writer. Such a visual imagination requires recognition. GW62

poetry full of images....................wondeful description of love and nature........Good Write..10+++

Heaven's nectar of love filled my cup, Of unmeasurable happiness; With saccharine joy in ev'ry drop. --------- lovely poetic verses. very imaginatively written........Brilliance!

simply spectral in effect, the cascades of imagination puring down from the heavenly alcove of love...sprinkling the euphoric dust...to encircle the mind with the luminscent rays of the auric moon..

What a beautiful poem...I enjoyed reading it it wont be my last time reading it either lol great write =) keep up ur written -Ash

Thank you for the pleasure of this poem..this should knowing you take the socks off of any girl of dreams to pass your way..thanks again..iip