strangely the environs
wore a deserted look
though it's homeward-time
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Lovely! Beautiful poem! I like this very much..Let Spring comes & stay in our lives for ever..
'nothing really pressing upon us'...yes; the distance between helps out...parrellel lives...joint journey nice work...thanks...10
'We walked in silence on either side of the ambling road' Rachel Ann Butler
Winter is indeed a bleak time. Vitamin D3 does lift your spirits!
I wonder sometimes about the winter and how we express her presence. Each garden finds winter different, Some find her cold others believe her distant whilst for some gardens this is a time to die and wait to be reborn again in spring, -! 0 How extaoridinary your poetry is Indira Thank you.
only you can write like that. so beautiful marks 10
Nice way of welcoming winter.... Both comforting and reassuring. A sweet 10.
the others stanza were just happenings..the last one shows existence...beautiful
the presence really meaningful..............and very nice..................
last stanza is a masterpiece........as long as we can make our presence felt to others (family, friends) , the world would be a better place to live in.... really a nice and sweet poem............10
a lovely wintry poem! a good description...