Thursday, October 29, 2009

At The Beginning Of A Winter Comments

Rating: 3.4

strangely the environs
wore a deserted look
though it's homeward-time
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indira babbellapati
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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 15 November 2009

a lovely wintry poem! a good description...

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Braja K Sarkar 15 November 2009

Lovely! Beautiful poem! I like this very much..Let Spring comes & stay in our lives for ever..

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Kesav Easwaran 10 November 2009

'nothing really pressing upon us'...yes; the distance between helps out...parrellel lives...joint journey nice work...thanks...10

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Rachel Butler 06 November 2009

'We walked in silence on either side of the ambling road' Rachel Ann Butler

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Deodath Debideen 03 November 2009

Winter is indeed a bleak time. Vitamin D3 does lift your spirits!

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Patrick A. Martin 02 November 2009

I wonder sometimes about the winter and how we express her presence. Each garden finds winter different, Some find her cold others believe her distant whilst for some gardens this is a time to die and wait to be reborn again in spring, -! 0 How extaoridinary your poetry is Indira Thank you.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 01 November 2009

only you can write like that. so beautiful marks 10

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 30 October 2009

a poem that floats so wonderfully! thank you.

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Chandrashekar A Posy Poet 30 October 2009

such a romatic expression.............kudos!

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Ranjit Ravindran 29 October 2009

Nice way of welcoming winter.... Both comforting and reassuring. A sweet 10.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 29 October 2009

the others stanza were just happenings..the last one shows existence...beautiful

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rago rago 29 October 2009

the presence really meaningful..............and very nice..................

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Nikunj Sharma 29 October 2009

last stanza is a masterpiece........as long as we can make our presence felt to others (family, friends) , the world would be a better place to live in.... really a nice and sweet poem............10

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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