At The Beginning Comments

There is so much emotion in this poem and it pulls at my heart. There is a yearning within you that is expressed so well in this poem. Very well written! .....Karin Anderson

So emotional..powerful..lovely..heartwarming... Great imagery..the words so clear and smooth! One of the best! ! !

I wanna be your heart and soul, givin you joy and bliss! ! Good writes Rurunaru. I luv yer name!