Wednesday, November 26, 2014

At That Moment All Ugliness Was Undone. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life that she sees in prettiness of colors,
Life that she feels in fragrance and odors,
Life that is beauty in the golden cuts,
Life that is same in the palace and huts,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Savita Tyagi 03 December 2014

Motherhood is beautiful. Beauty of life is fixed her newborn. No ugliness can find its place there. Great tribute to mothers.

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Amitava Sur 28 November 2014

An amazing poem in deed. Every mother is a holy mother when she beholds her newly born child in her lap and she finds all forms of beauty to be blossomed in her child...... thanks for sharing.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 27 November 2014

This is simply phenomenal write with beauty glowing in every line and my favorite line is at that moment all ugliness was undone......10/10.

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Valsa George 26 November 2014

All beautiful forms are the manifestations of God..... When one is able to see beauty in things, all ugliness is washed away! For a mother who beholds her child for the first time, she is able to prerceive all beauty crystallized on its face! Great write!

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Salini Nair 26 November 2014

for a mother her child is everything..nothing can replace it...amazing write enjoyed

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Salini Nair 26 November 2014

for a mother her child is everything..nothing can replace it...amazing write enjoyed

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Salini Nair 26 November 2014

for a mother her child is everything..nothing can replace it...amazing write enjoyed

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Khalida Bano Ali 26 November 2014

At that moment all ugliness was undone. A meaningful line..............10

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