Thursday, September 18, 2008

At Sea Comments

Rating: 2.5

A pirate lost at sea
Left twisted for loves beauty
Every floating wave a sweet harmmony
Haveing only a wish to the stars far away
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Pirate Love Magic Man
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*Trusting You* 16 November 2008

I like this one good job. the ending got me I didnt think that was going to happen though. It is very good. *Purkey Girl*

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Tyease Collins 25 September 2008

Beautiful poem. Absolutely beautiful. I love how short it is =] ^_~ <33 -Tess The Indian Princess

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Amber ... 21 September 2008

good poem

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