At Rest In The Snow Comments

This is a lovely poem. I did not think it about depression so much as enforced aloneness per se. Read mine: Saturday Moraning Mood Adeline

you were spot on with this poem... there are so many times i feel this way but all you can do is push through it knowing that it has to get harder before it gets easier.. amazing.10

Ah thankyou for pointing them out, I have changed them now. Theres probily many spelling mistakes in my earlier work, its just from where I was rushing to type them up from the handwriten copies. Cheers. -Matt-

You described your feelings of depression well in this neat poem. Nicely done. A few errors: 'mypain'-should be 'my pain' & 'lonleyness'-should be 'loneliness' ok I have two poems about depression, 'Out of Darkness' & 'Rainbows' End' if you care to read them & review also. Ravensong