~~~at Once My Love....I'Ll Let Go! ! ! Poem by POOJA LADYLUCK

~~~at Once My Love....I'Ll Let Go! ! !

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its midnight and we walk hand in hand
its so late love, i need to leave
i understand darl, just cant let go of u
touched, i ask, will it always be so?
reflecting a bit, he replied 'no'.........
'wen i'm dangling at the edge, still holding your hands
you, pulling me up, risking ur lyf
then and only then, widout letting u know
at once my love................i'll let go'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta Agarwal 22 September 2008

Pooja, this is a very touching tale of love, very beautifully penned, and an ending that takes the reader by surprise.powerful. Mamta

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