Tuesday, August 22, 2023

At Old Age Home Comments

Rating: 5.0

In an old age home, a tale of a young girl unfolds,
her eyes filled with tears and her heartache untold.
Her parents kept it clandestine and held their lips tight,
Until the school took the students to the old age home site.
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Anil Kumar Panda 23 August 2023

A very heart touching poem. Beautifully crafted. We have turned so selfish. We treat our parents as burdens once they become old. Nice ink.

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Sheeya Hacks 23 August 2023

A touchy Poem with free flow of emotions.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 23 August 2023

This beautiful poem reminds me of watching my mother die in hospice. Bravo! ! ! TFS

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Rebecca Navarre 22 August 2023

Thank you so much for sharing this with your readers! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 22 August 2023

An ever ever so inspirational write! .. Magnificent! .. Beyond #ING! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 22 August 2023

Absolutely heart moving! .. And ever so beautifully touching! .. Praise God her and her Grandmother found each other! ..

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Juhaina Tumlu 22 August 2023

I know what a child goes through when encountered with such emotional bonding. A lesson for everyon in your poem.

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Poetic Sky 22 August 2023

A very touchy poem, human emotions are uncontrolable in certain situation and I too flowed with the poem.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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