Saturday, January 2, 2010

At Night Comments

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Looking up at the sky I see a shooting star pass by
It makes me think of you and everything we have ever been through and how fast it all has gone by
Upon that shooting star I made a wish
Praying that we will always remain the same
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Anonymous Heart 01 March 2010

Beautiful poem. The emotions in this are brought to life.

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Chase Breeden 07 January 2010

Very nice expression of your feelings. One can almost feel everything you're talking about

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That was a really great love poem. You expressed your feelings beautifully. I hope love like this can last in your heart forever, even as I find it hard to believe something could last forever.

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