At Night On The High Seas: : रात की सिहाई में समंदर से बातें. Comments

Gham kahan umra dekhta hai

Akela, akela bus samander per letaa Purn shant vatavaran mein, hazaron deep ke sath Apne doston ke bare mein soch Gum ho jaata hoon us shanti mein akele Aur ek sawal poochta hoon: Kya ab bhi tum mere ho? ......loved these lines.....gham to bas apna hai, koi aur kahan apna banata hai....beautiful :)

Maza aagaya

Raat aur us par samundar se baatein, thodi romaani, thodi udaas... dil ki baatein sochon ki jheelon se guzar kar kalam ki nok par raqs karne lagti hai. khoobsurat translation.. aise hi likhte raho.. is khoobsurat kavita ko marks dena mushkil hai.100++++