Sunday, April 25, 2010

At Night On The Beach Comments

Rating: 4.5

A breeze from the ocean
Cools the beach
The stars up above
Seem just out of reach
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James Frady
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Rachael Curtis 25 April 2010

This poem is so pretty! The imagery you have used is so strong and it appeals to my sense of imagination, I can picture the scene so clearly! Thank you =) Well done!

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James Frady

Marion, North Carolina
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