Beside the pale, gentle moon
There shone a single radiant star,
Etched in the night of somber hue.
As I looked up a mighty swoon
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The last verse of this poem is one of the most lovely that I have read. I gave this my normal high score of nine because of that beautiful verse. GW62
The last verse of this poem is one of the most lovely that I have read. I gave this my normal high score of nine because of that beautiful verse. GW62
it is easy to get into your words and images. beautiful relation between you and the cosmic elements -10
Could be a memory, or perhaps a dream! Whatever........a splendid rendition indeed!
I very much enjoyed reading your poem(At Night) you have a great talent. I wish I could read the one written in your 'Mother's tongue', as well. I hope you will post some more.
A peak experience Lucianne am epiphany which few recieve. Indescribable knowledge of the interconnectedness of everyone and everything. ivor
Lovely poem Lucianne, you paint a most beautiful picture.10/10. Best wishes, Andrew
lovely poem, quite smooching as when glimmered by gleams of love that adrits in dream, thanks for asharing
Lucianne after reading this poem i started looking for more of yours; pl post more; great poem
Hi honey I realy like your poem, is beautiful. Can you read my poems and advise me? if you prefer... poesyas.blogspot.com Yours
Lucianne: a very good creation Please read my poems and advise
A well woven rendering my friend. It conveys a most beautiful picture to the minds eye. as always, wordsy.
Yes the last lines....10.