Thursday, August 23, 2007

At Night [old Poem] Comments

Rating: 3.4

Beside the pale, gentle moon
There shone a single radiant star,
Etched in the night of somber hue.
As I looked up a mighty swoon
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Lucianne Fasolo
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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 September 2008

Yes the last lines....10.

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Greenwolfe 1962 15 July 2008

The last verse of this poem is one of the most lovely that I have read. I gave this my normal high score of nine because of that beautiful verse. GW62

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Greenwolfe 1962 15 July 2008

The last verse of this poem is one of the most lovely that I have read. I gave this my normal high score of nine because of that beautiful verse. GW62

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Bianca J. Walker 23 June 2008

I like this. Beautiful imagery.

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Roland Bastien 26 May 2008

it is easy to get into your words and images. beautiful relation between you and the cosmic elements -10

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James B. Earley 23 March 2008

Could be a memory, or perhaps a dream! Whatever........a splendid rendition indeed!

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C.R. Clark 03 February 2008

I very much enjoyed reading your poem(At Night) you have a great talent. I wish I could read the one written in your 'Mother's tongue', as well. I hope you will post some more.

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Ivor Hogg 02 February 2008

A peak experience Lucianne am epiphany which few recieve. Indescribable knowledge of the interconnectedness of everyone and everything. ivor

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Andrew Blakemore 19 December 2007

Lovely poem Lucianne, you paint a most beautiful picture.10/10. Best wishes, Andrew

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Dr.subhendu Kar 02 December 2007

lovely poem, quite smooching as when glimmered by gleams of love that adrits in dream, thanks for asharing

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William Jackson 25 November 2007

Lovely poem. Please post more.

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Denise Sbar 18 November 2007

Such a beautiful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing.

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rajagopal haran 10 November 2007

Lucianne after reading this poem i started looking for more of yours; pl post more; great poem

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Sonny Rainshine 07 November 2007

Beautiful description. Write some more!

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Leandro Borges 07 November 2007

Hi honey I realy like your poem, is beautiful. Can you read my poems and advise me? if you prefer... poesyas.blogspot.com Yours

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WILFRED JOHN 06 November 2007

dear at night is a good poem

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Tarapada Mohapatra 04 November 2007

Lucianne: a very good creation Please read my poems and advise

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Wordsy Wright 29 October 2007

A well woven rendering my friend. It conveys a most beautiful picture to the minds eye. as always, wordsy.

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Caelee Laing 24 October 2007

Hot poem... :) very detailed..nice technique..

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Marvin Brato 15 October 2007

A classic poetry my friend, thanks for sharing.

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Lucianne Fasolo

Lucianne Fasolo

Curitiba, Brazil
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