Sunday, July 15, 2007

At Night - - - After Comments

Rating: 3.0

There she goes again,
she just passed through my mind,
I can't see which way to go today,
... her love no longer mine.
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Barry Van Allen
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Dee Daffodil 18 July 2007

I love the last part... In the darkness there is found a voice that utters not a sound and tells the story that the mind won't comprehend... Absolutely beautiful work Barry. I am in awe of your ability to make your poems flow so smoothly. Time and time again, I come back to them. They are steadfast and true...great work! Hugs, dee

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