Tuesday, February 14, 2012

At Marina Beach, Chennai.. Comments

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silvery sands of marina,
glitter under the moon light,
shine under the sun light.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Saiom Shriver 30 March 2012

I am truly envious never having been at the beach in Chennai which you so beautifully describe

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 14 February 2012

so sweet and so wonderful. suggestion: touch to touches in fifth line

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Raj Arumugam 14 February 2012

yes that last line is very dramatic as Grunter says...good description of the beach too...

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