At Least Thats What I Tell Myself... Comments

Nice Piece. Title is sincere...like it!

wow! i love this on! It's something that I've felt but could never express as well as you just did! Great stuff! ! !

hmm i wasnt aware poems had to even rhyme let alone have the same rrhythm. but thanks i appreciate ur comment..

Not Bad, if you work on the sytax like how Its supposed to bound from one line to the next it would be great. Like Ryhem one Blah Ryhem two Blah Something like that

first to the other person who commented if u want to leave a comment better be a gd one this poem is great i like it very much and a poem is a ball of feelings and feelings are never meaningless keep on writing your poems have a unique rhym ok too much talk just great poem: D

i really dont like this because its more of a ramble about your feelings instead of somehtign with any meaning to it.

hey.. this i like this 1 tooo <3...10/10

You poem echoes the negotiation so many of us have made in our heads at one time or another. The attempt to shake off a loss, someone's leaving, it does it well.

Thatz real tight u gots a talent...

I just wanted to say Beautiful poem. great write.

Aww remins me of me at one point of time not too long ago. great poem touching aching. Lylyanna