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Time was in haste as it is One was feeding all its way Sowed hatred spread its wings Annihilation blended in sand love the true life to solitude....

for a peaceful tomorrow let us love our fellow man nice writing

Goodness is always good and dwells in other's heart too. Beautifully crafted and drafted poem specific to time but murder is the extreme of cruelty. Expression of sadness in nice poem.

Let us hope that the tree of hope branches out and provide shade to one and all, just contrast to the 'branch less tree, ' that you mention in the last stanza. Great writing.

poetess made a message to us Time was in haste as it is One was feeding all its way Sowed hatred spread its wings

Time was in haste as it is One was feeding all its way Sowed hatred spread its wings Annihilation blended in sand A poisonous part of life's ruin Great thoughts great poem!

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

We see hatred and jealousy all over the world becoming manifested in the form of terrorism and unless prevented from spreading further it will definitely one day destroy this world.....to quote an unknown Hatred stirs up strife, but love covers all offenses........very nicely composed....thanks for sharing...10

Hatred sprouts as branch less tree! Yes, Hatred is manifest everywhere and in all actions of many a men! If it is allowed to grow unchecked, it will ruin the world! Let us flee from the danger zone of hatred and seek shelter in the bastions of peace! The craving for peace is powerfully expressed!

Seems in era of dryness still we hope for life to rejoice and feel. At least we should realize. Beautiful presentation.

Hatred sprouts as branchless tree Heart vibrates in extreme terms Air will be toxic and roam endless Burn it on the yard and flee from there For a peaceful tomorrow at least! A nice poem, a hopeboosting write.

A beautiful optimistic poem, which comes from heart with sincerity of purpose.Well expressed.Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

for a peaceful tomorrow, thanks, good writing..