Saturday, September 28, 2013

At Last A Goodbye Comments

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six-souls
at the bottom of an Oklahoma lake;
forty-three plus years
and never a wake.
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Smoky Hoss
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Patti Masterman 28 September 2013

This story shocked me. I imagined the second car lost settling in beside (or even on top of?) the first car, submerged for some time..did the inhabitants of the second car glimpse the first car, and see their fate written there, the same? Thanks for this Smoky. You wrote some thoughts of mine in here.. great minds and all that ;)

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Abhishek Mishra 28 September 2013

You crafted the exact scene through the poem..fantastic, loved it: -)

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