At Last Comments

there is more than just a sense of serenity in this work, becoming amplified straight through to the final line. yet, it (as sarcasm in some of your other pieces) covers a deep-seeded resentment that emerges here and there. personally it is a style that I like and just my opinion. overall, one of my favorites. -Tailor

A beautiful scene of tranquility you have created her Ted, a wonderful verse. Best wishes, Andrew

Hi Ted, I loved the picturesque poetic tone in your writing… How you negated the feeling “cold” as the foremost description of dying because now the dead is one with the air and water… beautiful words and expressions. Deva

simply gorgeous! I enjoyed the timeless energy of death that never dies

Beautiful! You 'urned' a 10!

Thank god there was'nt a tornado you could have been scattered over Cuba- great humerous poem dispensed with wit, regards

finally iam free..............very very well penned! !