Tuesday, August 14, 2007

At Last.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

At last I stand before your eyes
Clothed in shreds of consciousness
To abandon what of me remains
To your first and each succeeding kiss
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Frank Bana
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Tai Chi Italy 03 December 2008

Wow! I see why you are on my list of fabulous but naughty poets dear Frank! So sensual to come together at last. Smiling at you, Tai

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Tatianna Rei Moonshadow 04 November 2008

A well deserved ten, I love how sensually you have worded this piece.

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Genna Somer 12 March 2008

wow..........it's beautiful!

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Sensual... passionate yet delicate. Perfect in rhythm. t x

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Ernestine Northover 14 August 2007

A beautifully written piece, woven with such passion, yet delicate in its art. Delightful read. Excellent. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Jennifer Unknown 14 August 2007

Lovely poem. It paints a beautiful mind picture.

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