At last I stand before your eyes
Clothed in shreds of consciousness
To abandon what of me remains
To your first and each succeeding kiss
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A well deserved ten, I love how sensually you have worded this piece.
Sensual... passionate yet delicate. Perfect in rhythm. t x
A beautifully written piece, woven with such passion, yet delicate in its art. Delightful read. Excellent. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Wow! I see why you are on my list of fabulous but naughty poets dear Frank! So sensual to come together at last. Smiling at you, Tai