Monday, July 16, 2018

At Home, While Out There Comments

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at home
home, this private place
yes here, there may be
many things, items owned
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Rob Knetsch
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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 July 2018

Lovely poem, though complete, but still missing a friend, BUT I thought that the wife or the husband IS the best friend after all the miniscule quarrels. I can say this because of own experience of course, but if yours is different and you created this lovely poem, then your married life is not as you expected to be. IF so, the friend in your concluding line, IS that someone you still need. Thank you for sharing, Rob!

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 July 2018

it is something that is missing something that is captured in a word that can replace all those many other words, yes a word that is written as friend.....valuable friendship...... no man is an island here on earth......... thank u for picturing the necessity of friendship and how serene friendship is. tony

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