At Home Abound.... Comments
Close by Dichteren's neighborhood
wandering lonely as in some famous verses
watching the deep blue sea
some seagulls approaching me
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A fabulous piece of poetry! Loved reading it. My favorite lines: leaving the memories behind/I have tried to find froth coming from the abyss/my Lord, is this all there is? .........(10)
You never cease to joy my heart dear friend with your brilliant pen! When memories fade away and we have no present nor past, we may be able to gasp what all there is means. Indeed, love and bliss, people and things alike we are all brothers and sisters.
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8/5/2025 4:52:58 PM # 1.0.0
froth coming from the abyss my Lord, is this all there is? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -This is painting a mood, an atmosphere, for a poem! ! ! ! Absolutely top-notch writing. Word choice excels, and there is a dark kind of rhythm to this piece, a melancholy underlining the verses. I am captivated.10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
WOW! An american poetess has read this without stress, and I am blessed because all the cute compliments coming from her caring heart and soul. Thank you Lord, thank you Sweetest Sue, is that you, we just met and looks like ages. This is Sue's premier visit to my poem site.Thank you too for the gigantic 10! ! ! ! !