Monday, January 28, 2008

At Her Lowest Comments

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The sheets were black
perhaps a vivid sign
about the state of it,
why praise the Lord?
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Emancipation Planz 25 February 2009

H.x the first time I saw this was when I was 15..3 days I watched/heard/felt heroin withdrawal of another street kid.. so this write is an expression of Sad.. but hauntingful... full of hope and love and strength of a supportive soul.. tis what shines through here... tis not all low here.. there is a lot of uplift.. haha.. don't really need to say to you.. 'Keep righting them one peace at a time'.. but I just did anyway.. aroha Dxx

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Thad Wilk 28 January 2008

Beautiful write again Herbert! A pleasure to read this poem! ! *10plus*! Friend Thad

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Gisela Nemeth 28 January 2008

Herbert, genau so ist es wenn du arm bist, traurig!

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