Saturday, January 24, 2009

At First Sight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Clouds have cleared to colour the sky blue
Whilst leaves have turned red since I last saw you
The seasons have changed yet am still the same
Same man, same feelings and still the same aim
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Allemagne Roßmann 14 February 2010

Our hazel eyes meet and sink in love as we near We're face to face as I look into the eyes of grace Love at first sight...................hazelnut romantic and tasty.....i hope you enjoyed those moments.Do read some of mine specially IN MOMENTS.....SCARF, IF I WERE HER TEARS, KOISHII and FLOWERS OF LOVE.....i hope they will contribute your hazelnuts though they did not contribute mine in reality. 10/10 for your effort.

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Jodie Pollock 29 January 2010

beautiful writing, seasons have changed, but i am still here x

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Honest Heart 16 November 2009

Greeeeeeeeeat poem :) :) ....10+++++

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another read and while iam passing through the lines remembered this beautiful touching passionated poem..10++++ For she's the only remedy for this pain in my heart I feel her lips on my neck for the very first time With hearts beating faster her lips then met mine It was as though as we had a lack of air As I ran my hands through her fine silky hair Old age reflected on my weary face But with her age apparently left no trace

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wow..a wonderful passionated poem..excellent one Yaser...110++++++

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Maryam Khan 29 January 2009

This is a cute poem, I can see your love for her is golden. This is definitely a genuine love poem you got right here. Well best wishes to you both, good luck.

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