Thursday, October 29, 2015

At First Sight Comments

Rating: 4.7

Our eyes met and spoke in a language
We both understood at once
And in the matter of a second
I felt and I knew you felt too
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Nosheen Irfan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 September 2021

Beautiful.... beautifully written! Lovely expression! ?

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Binayakumar Mohanty 22 October 2017

The world came to a stand still And the time paused As lond as our gaze held each other.Nicely craftd poem.I loved it Thanks for sharing. Deserves 10+++ Binaya

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 October 2017

It has been wonderfully inscribed on love at the first sight. Between the eyes of two opposite bodies such as male and female, love is generated without speaking any words. You have nicely inscribed... For without a word love had flowed from me to you And you to me The world came to a standstill And the time paused As long as our gaze held each other. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Seamus O Brian 03 December 2016

Vividly romantic recounting of the combustion of two souls who immediately see in each other all that typifies our highest desires. You communicate clearly our fascinating ability to communicate to each other without any words at all. Being oblivious to the fire of the sun melting the earth because of the trance of new love echoes powerfully in the memories of those who have experienced it. Oh, to live in the rapture of such a state, but to know that the sheer force of it would kill you indeed. Very romantic, indeed, dear Nosheen. Be blessed, my friend!

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 July 2016

We both understood at once! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Loaded with love and pregnant with a passion that soothes the soul. This is simply splendid Nosheen!

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M Asim Nehal 31 December 2015

A true love, language no hindrance / barrier....colour no concern, region no matter, love is love it begins by meeting of eyes and settles in heart.......lovely poem.10+++

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Kavya . 29 October 2015

wow..good one..yes love is blind...and does not need any words to say..eyes speak everything

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Nosheen Irfan 29 October 2015

Thank u so much Kavya.

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