Monday, August 13, 2018

At Fifty! Comments

Rating: 5.0

At twelve
The world was elusive
the winds
Had stories to tell
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abu tarek md tahsin
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Chinedu Dike 19 October 2019

Beautifully conceived and elegantly crafted with conviction. A insightful work of art.

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Richard Wlodarski 14 August 2018

I love how you described your life up to age 15. Full of optimism! But after that, you start to become pessimistic. With that beer, please start shedding tears of joy. You'll start to regain your youthful optimism. That being said, it's an excellent poem!

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 August 2018

Time comes in disguise by named AGE and change the child to SAGE But time has no change in SPACE /// nice writing

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 August 2018

Such a great poem, Abu Tarek....10++++

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Rajnish Manga 14 August 2018

Wonderful assessment of the impact of aging but why tears with beer. This is a mismatch. I would like to clear my tears with a bottle of beer. Thanks for such an entertaining poem.

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